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yikes
11-09-2007, 09:21 AM
while combing the internet for personal statement writing advice i came across the following abstract. I read the article and it was pretty interesting. has anyone else looked at it?

Written Communication, Vol. 21, No. 3, 242-260 (2004)
DOI: 10.1177/0741088304264338
© 2004 SAGE Publications
Self-Composed

Rhetoric in Psychology Personal Statements

Robert M. Brown
University of Texas at Austin

The personal statement written for graduate school admission has been a genre virtually ignored by rhetoricians but one that deserves attention. Not only a document of pragmatic importance for applicants, the personal statement is an indicator of disciplinary socialization. The discipline studied here is clinical psychology. Combining quantitative and qualitative methods, the author analyzed a corpus of statements to identify features distinguishing statements of admitted applicants from those of rejected applicants. The findings showed that successful applicants attended more to projecting their future research endeavors and demonstrating their commitments to scientific epistemology. Thus, the author argues that the modifier personal needs qualification, because successful applicants tend to emphasize their public identities as apprentice scientists.


Key Words: personal statement writing • genre • graduate school admission statements • personal writing • public writing

spillsomepaint
11-09-2007, 10:13 AM
this is just the abstract right? do you have access to the full text? (i'm gonna go try to search for it anyway if you don't)

It sounds similiar to the article about personal statements called something along the lines of Kisses of Death : Personal Statments (feel free to correct me cause i know this is wrong!) but it's something like that and the authors go through and anaylize various ps and interview admittind advisors to get a break down on the biggest DONT's.

yikes
11-09-2007, 10:39 AM
I do have the full text, but wasn't sure if I could legally post it since I got it through work.

the article you mentioned does sound similar. if you could pm it to m e that would be nice.

chaos
11-09-2007, 03:05 PM
spillsomepaint- If you have that article, would you PM it to me as well? I would love to know what not to do, because chances are, I will do it, haha.

spillsomepaint
11-09-2007, 07:58 PM
I'm not forgetting about you guys! I'll PM you both tomorrow with the text, I just got off a long shift at work and am too tired to go searching through refworks!

apumic
11-10-2007, 10:25 PM
Spillsomepaint,

Would you be able to send me a copy of that article as well?

Thanks!

PhDshallsee
11-11-2007, 08:12 AM
Can I have a copy as well? Thanks!

NYCPsych
11-11-2007, 02:30 PM
Ah, if only there were a similar study looking at PsyD apps! ;-) (I imagine these were PhDs- research focus)

apumic
11-11-2007, 04:10 PM
Yeah...the one by Brown definitely is, although you could probably make some useful extrapolations from it as to what your PsyD app should focus on and what to avoid. If you're still in school, I'd do a search on Google for the Browne article and it should bring up a site to which your school might have access (mine did when I searched for it...), but I couldn't find the other article mentioned...hopefully it'll get PM'd to us shortly! :-)

WaitingKills
11-11-2007, 06:01 PM
Spillsomepaint - If you have a sec could you send it to me as well! I'd love you for it!

spillsomepaint
11-12-2007, 02:01 PM
can i just copy and paste the article to this thread? I've received about a dozen PM from people wanting this article as well as the people who've posted on the thread.


if not here is a link to it:

http://www.leaonline.com/doi/pdf/10.1207/s15328023top3301_5


let me know if it works.

PhDshallsee
11-12-2007, 02:20 PM
Hi spillmesomepaint, the link didn't work for me, however, I do now see that I actually have the article in question, so thank you anyways!

yikes
11-12-2007, 02:34 PM
here's a link for the article i was referring to

http://wcx.sagepub.com/cgi/reprint/21/3/242

WaitingKills
11-12-2007, 11:24 PM
By any chance do you guys know of a place to get a copy of the article without having to pay for it? Thanks

(I'm a little broke :()

zeldazelda
11-13-2007, 06:09 AM
I was able to get one of them through my University's library. The other, the one from Sage, has a free trial through Nov. 30th if you sign up.

neuronerd1
11-20-2007, 07:15 PM
Hi guys and gals,

If you have time could you please pm those articles to me too? I cannot get them online since I don't have an account. Thanks

BorntoRun
11-21-2007, 04:21 AM
Hey all, I found the article (for free, no subscription) on this website:
http://www.leaonline.com/doi/abs/10.1207/s15328023top3301_5?journalCode=top

BUT... it's (unfortunately) nothing you haven't read and heard before.