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Old 05-29-2012, 08:42 PM   #1
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I'll be applying to pharm school this year and need some help on my personal statement. I have a very lackluster statement so far and would love for some SDN veterans to give me some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. I feel it's very generic and can't find a way to make it brief and effective. I can email/pm my statement... just let me know!


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Old 05-30-2012, 08:39 AM   #2
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I'll be applying to pharm school this year and need some help on my personal statement. I have a very lackluster statement so far and would love for some SDN veterans to give me some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. I feel it's very generic and can't find a way to make it brief and effective. I can email/pm my statement... just let me know!


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Some reason I felt like there was a Megathread by SDN mods dedicated for proofreading PSs. Can't find it anymore. hmmmm
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Old 05-30-2012, 10:15 AM   #3
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Some reason I felt like there was a Megathread by SDN mods dedicated for proofreading PSs. Can't find it anymore. hmmmm
Historicly we start a new one every year, then retire it once application season is over. I wonder if it is time for the new one?
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Historicly we start a new one every year, then retire it once application season is over. I wonder if it is time for the new one?
Yeah that would be much appreciated. I feel like I need more than just me and my friends reading my PS. I need actual Prepharmers and pharmers
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Old 05-30-2012, 07:36 PM   #5
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That's what I thought too (I found the thread for last application cycle, but didn't know if I could post there). I supposed they haven't started one yet? I have followed the forum for a couple of years now, but just recently created a profile so I'm still a somewhat newbie here. If you guys do find the megathread for proofreading, please post the link here! =)
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These things take time. For now, feel free to shot me a PM and I will try to offer what feedback I can.
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These things take time. For now, feel free to shot me a PM and I will try to offer what feedback I can.
Hey owle, if I send you a rough personal statement, can you rate it? THANKS!
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You bet. Send it to owlegrad at studentdoctor.net
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You bet. Send it to owlegrad at studentdoctor.net
Cool! I really appreciate your time and help! I will get it to you as soon as I can thanks again
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