Could anyone read my Personal Statement 1st Draft please?

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yanjin

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I have been trying to make this PS interesting to read, but I am not very confident with my English.:oops::oops::oops: Also I need to cut it down to one page. It's 1.5 pages now....Can anyone give me some help on this? Please feel free to comment on it. :)

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I'll take a look at it. Just PM me
 
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I can also try to help...PM me
 
I don't want start a new thread as there is no point but is anyone willing to read mine? Thanks
 
I will be happy to read both posters' PS essays. Please PM me.
 
I'm also looking for people to look over mine :(
 
PM me if you still need someone to read it
 
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