I am applying for a BS / MD medical program, and need some one to help with my personal statement.
Cheesy, but what can you do?
Prompt: Basically why I want to go into medicine (motivations, interests, etc.)
The image appeared on the screen. Supposedly, it was of a human baby. As the mother reacted emotionally to the image, I was left feeling underwhelmed at my first time seeing an ultrasound. Every time an ultrasound appears in a TV show, cheesy piano music starts playing and the characters react melodramatically. This experience was decidedly different. What was so great about a seemingly indiscernible mass in black and white? Noticing my lack of reaction, the doctor explained that, soon, the fetus will start developing sex characteristics and fingernails, and eventually start looking like a human. This was interesting to hear, as I wondered how a combination of two cells could become a human in such a short time. I recall this as being one of the first experiences that spurred me to go into medicine.
Having interned in the gynecology department of an Indian Hospital, I noticed that many women complained of problems associated with Polycystic Ovarian Sydrome, a common endocrine disorder affecting about 10% of women of reproductive age. PCOS often leads to serious diseases such as diabetes later in life. As my mother was diabetec, I saw first hand the great suffering associated with the disease. This observation lead me to write a paper on Prediction models for insulin resistance in patients with PCOS. With prediction models, patients can be screened for insulin insensitivity based on a few factors derived using statistical regression, thus eliminating the time waste and expense of testing many patients for insulin resistance, and allowing for earlier medical intervention. This experience showed me how a disease can be diagnosed through noninvasive methods, and I invisioned diagnosing patients myself one day.
From the mathematical modeling of lung tissue viscosity to programming robots, science is my passion. In 7th grade, I became a member of BeWise (Better Education for Women in Science and Engineering). Through BeWise, I was able to research recent technologies in Biotech companies. I came across BiOptic's Qsep100, a device that allows for post PCR separation and detection of DNA fragments through gel electrophoresis. As I watched the lab assistant carefully place each PCR tube into the thermal cylinder, I found myself studying the process intently. A couple of hours later, with the newly replicated DNA, the lab assistant identified the malignant cells, and found that the patient had leukemia. This quick diagnosis of diseases using replicated DNA fascinated me, spurring me to find more efficient ways of disease diagnosis by going into medicine.
As a young high school student, I have much to learn. However, I believe that my interest in research along with my compassion for others, would make me a successful student in medical school. I hope to take my knowledge and eventually become the doctor that I want to be.
Cheesy, but what can you do?
Prompt: Basically why I want to go into medicine (motivations, interests, etc.)
The image appeared on the screen. Supposedly, it was of a human baby. As the mother reacted emotionally to the image, I was left feeling underwhelmed at my first time seeing an ultrasound. Every time an ultrasound appears in a TV show, cheesy piano music starts playing and the characters react melodramatically. This experience was decidedly different. What was so great about a seemingly indiscernible mass in black and white? Noticing my lack of reaction, the doctor explained that, soon, the fetus will start developing sex characteristics and fingernails, and eventually start looking like a human. This was interesting to hear, as I wondered how a combination of two cells could become a human in such a short time. I recall this as being one of the first experiences that spurred me to go into medicine.
Having interned in the gynecology department of an Indian Hospital, I noticed that many women complained of problems associated with Polycystic Ovarian Sydrome, a common endocrine disorder affecting about 10% of women of reproductive age. PCOS often leads to serious diseases such as diabetes later in life. As my mother was diabetec, I saw first hand the great suffering associated with the disease. This observation lead me to write a paper on Prediction models for insulin resistance in patients with PCOS. With prediction models, patients can be screened for insulin insensitivity based on a few factors derived using statistical regression, thus eliminating the time waste and expense of testing many patients for insulin resistance, and allowing for earlier medical intervention. This experience showed me how a disease can be diagnosed through noninvasive methods, and I invisioned diagnosing patients myself one day.
From the mathematical modeling of lung tissue viscosity to programming robots, science is my passion. In 7th grade, I became a member of BeWise (Better Education for Women in Science and Engineering). Through BeWise, I was able to research recent technologies in Biotech companies. I came across BiOptic's Qsep100, a device that allows for post PCR separation and detection of DNA fragments through gel electrophoresis. As I watched the lab assistant carefully place each PCR tube into the thermal cylinder, I found myself studying the process intently. A couple of hours later, with the newly replicated DNA, the lab assistant identified the malignant cells, and found that the patient had leukemia. This quick diagnosis of diseases using replicated DNA fascinated me, spurring me to find more efficient ways of disease diagnosis by going into medicine.
As a young high school student, I have much to learn. However, I believe that my interest in research along with my compassion for others, would make me a successful student in medical school. I hope to take my knowledge and eventually become the doctor that I want to be.