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I want to say that I have volunteered with medically underserved populations, primarily through tutoring students, and this allowed me exposure to some of the obstacles they face in accessing healthcare like being uninsured and not having insurance.
Does this sound petty because I bring in tutoring to the MEDICALLY underserved populations? (they were educationally underserved too, but is unrelated to the prompt)
this is a small, 250 word why X school essay
Essentially the school has a clinic that services the underserved, and I wanted to say i wanted to be involved in that clinic because I've worked with underserved populations for many years, mostly through education.
That was my entire point, and then I move on to the next thing that appeals to me at the school. Do you think this is acceptable given the character limit and topic?
I want to say that I have volunteered with medically underserved populations, primarily through tutoring students, and this allowed me exposure to some of the obstacles they face in accessing healthcare like being uninsured and not having insurance.
Does this sound petty because I bring in tutoring to the MEDICALLY underserved populations? (they were educationally underserved too, but is unrelated to the prompt)
this is a small, 250 word why X school essay
Essentially the school has a clinic that services the underserved, and I wanted to say i wanted to be involved in that clinic because I've worked with underserved populations for many years, mostly through education.
That was my entire point, and then I move on to the next thing that appeals to me at the school. Do you think this is acceptable given the character limit and topic?
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