General Admissions & OTCAS Critical Feedback on Personal Statement

[mayosauce]

Hi, I was wondering if anyone would be able to read my personal statement and provide some feedback? It's my first time applying and writing a personal statement. I'm definitely not the best writer, so any help would be much appreciated!

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[aama0616a]

I don't mind, you can send it my way!

 

[calling4color]

you can send it to me too -