Personal Statement conundrum

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Hello all,

Looking for some opinions. Last summer I made the mistake of taking the MCAT before I was ready and got a 27. I took the exam late July, and had submitted primaries by then, so that my MCAT would meet up with my app to be complete. After seeing my 27, I knew I had no chance at the schools I sent primaries, and only filled out a secondary to a school I had really strong ties to and interviewed, albeit extremely late, and was eventually rejected. I honestly couldn't reason spending that much money on secondaries with a 27 MCAT, statistically I could have just gone to the casino with better odds.

Most of their feedback was somewhat focused on their niche, as its a specialized program I applied to. Mainly my application didn't highlight the programs focus enough but that is not my dilemma for the second time around.

I poured my heart and soul into my personal statement, my freaking advisor smiled and cried in the 8 minutes reading it, and has been well received from everyone I send it to. My problem is that in my post-interview-debrief, I was told to write a new personal statement, not that anything is wrong with this statement but, the committee will want to see a new letter, so as to not seem lazy (or seem like I did nothing but apply earlier to hope for a different decision).

So my question is, how much do/can I keep from the old statement? Obviously its possible to write a new statement, but I only showed that PS, to one school, and one major reason I wasn't accepted was a late app (was told the "MCAT score never came up as an issue"). I would gladly write a new PS just for that school, but thats not possible (right?). As its a school that I have ties with and statistically speaking the best chance of attending, I want to make it happy, but also want to put the strongest statement possible forward, and unfortunately I feel like I just wrote it 10 months too early. I answered why my experiences had led me to choose medicine, and those reasons haven't changed in 4 months since rejection. How far have you all gone with scrapping the old PS? Did you keep any elements? Thanks for the input.

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I had to rewrite mine for reapplication too. Even if you can't re-write the entire thing, something needs to change. Maybe incorporate additional experiences you've had this year and definitely change your intro. Edit the whole thing to make sentences stronger. Essays can always be improved!

Another thing you could try if you want to use the same experiences is to open a fresh Word document and write a new statement (don't look at the old one). That way it will turn out differently.
 
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