I just wanted to provide a brief outline of my PS and get your opinions on it:
* Why I want to be a physician. Here, I tell a brief story related to why I decided to go into medicine.
* Background concerning the fact that I grew up in Appalachia and how lack of access to healthcare has affected the region. That I want to practice there after residency
*Background specifically concerning me. 1st person in my family to attend high school., First to go to grad school. Explanation of my change of major and why I went to grad school. The experience of grad school has helped me grow as a person, etc.
*Drawing the ADCOM's attention to the Cs I got in Ochem and pointing out that I am a lab tech for the freshmen and organic labs at my university (have been for about 3 years) and I have learned much more there than when I was taking classes. Also pointed out a D and F I got in two other courses and essentially accepted full blame for that and said that from those experiences I have learned "what not to do."
This all comes to 3670 characters (of 5300 allowed).
So does anyone have any suggestions as to what else I might say or anything I have said that I shouldn't have? Any advice at all would be helpful.
* Why I want to be a physician. Here, I tell a brief story related to why I decided to go into medicine.
* Background concerning the fact that I grew up in Appalachia and how lack of access to healthcare has affected the region. That I want to practice there after residency
*Background specifically concerning me. 1st person in my family to attend high school., First to go to grad school. Explanation of my change of major and why I went to grad school. The experience of grad school has helped me grow as a person, etc.
*Drawing the ADCOM's attention to the Cs I got in Ochem and pointing out that I am a lab tech for the freshmen and organic labs at my university (have been for about 3 years) and I have learned much more there than when I was taking classes. Also pointed out a D and F I got in two other courses and essentially accepted full blame for that and said that from those experiences I have learned "what not to do."
This all comes to 3670 characters (of 5300 allowed).
So does anyone have any suggestions as to what else I might say or anything I have said that I shouldn't have? Any advice at all would be helpful.