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I was piecing together pieces of two essays into one and missed this when I was proofreading. (Activities changed for anonymity but the structural mistake is the same)
Instead of saying "Through working at X and volunteering at an anorexia support group, blah blah blah" it says "Through working at X and volunteering anorexia support group volunteer, blah blah blah."
It's possible that someone reading through it quickly might miss it, but what if they notice?
Instead of saying "Through working at X and volunteering at an anorexia support group, blah blah blah" it says "Through working at X and volunteering anorexia support group volunteer, blah blah blah."
It's possible that someone reading through it quickly might miss it, but what if they notice?