I was wondering if someone could give me a critique as well?
24 yr. old/ Male/ Texas resident
Degree: B.A. in Biology and Philosophy, University of the Incarnate Word
cGPA: 3.47
Animal Experience:
500 hours as a Store-Team Member at Pet Supplies Plus; taking care and handling of various small and exotic animals
Lifetime experience of working on family game-ranch in Blanco, TX- feeding, taking care of exotic African/Indian game such as: Zebras, Lechwe, Addax, Orok, Blackbuck, and others
7 months of working alongside military working dogs, also providing care to them when needed
Veterinary Experience:
Small Animal: 10 hours (still working on getting hours)
Large Animal: N/A
Live-tissue training in the United States Marine Corps: 5 hours of live-tissue training on pigs; used to practice combat-trauma skills
Professional Summary
Served in the United States Marine Corps as an infantryman from Mar. 2011/ Jun. 2014
This is a pretty rough-skeleton. I am working on accruing more veterinary-hours, but other than that, what should I do to make my resume more competitive? There are a few awards I can post but I don't think that's necessary for now because I only wanted to relay the "meat" of the resume. Let me know what you all think!
Hi CombatVeteranVeterinarian!
Your military experience is unique and diverse. I have a few classmates who are ex-active duty (honorably discharged), and at least one who is currently active-reserves. It's really awesome to talk to them about all the stuff they've done and places they've traveled. Military folks typically have excellent leadership experience, and tend to shine under pressure. If I were reviewing applications, I'd view military experience as a huge plus in favor of an applicant's acceptance.
Swine and small ruminants are still used in trauma training, not only at military establishments, but also at human trauma centers (large hospitals) throughout the country. I've assisted on a few of these exercises, and they're incredibly valuable as a training exercise. For those I've participated in, the animals were deeply anesthetized, and euthanized humanely once the exercise was completed. It was a very humane process, and invaluable for all parties involved. I learned a ton.
Cool stuff with the captive African wildlife. I volunteered at a zoo for three years prior to applying, but mostly interacted with small, tropical species. I have no experience with large African hoofstock, and would have loved that.
You're working on exactly what you need to do prior to applying- racking up your clinical hours. As much as you can, try to diversify here as well. Some schools really like to see a 'balanced' experience portfolio. Try hard to bank some large animal clinical hours (either equine, food animal- or even better, both!) and continue to accrue small animal hours. Once you've satisfied those two sweeping requirements, you can try going after more 'exotic' experience (exotic animals, zoo animals, lab animals). I would class these as 'icing on the cake,' and should be pursued as secondary goals after small and large animal experience. My experience portfolio was very lab animal heavy (small animal practice was actually my lowest category of accrued hour), but this isn't typical.
If you have a specific interest area in mind, be sure that your experience portfolio reflects dominance in that area, and that you recount the connection between the two in your PS. For example, if you're set on being an equine vet, be sure that your application reflects a boat load of equine experience, and talk about it in your PS (while also discussing the value of diversifying your remaining experience). It's best if applicants present a 'compelling narrative,' tying together events/elements in logical succession, like a story. An admissions counselor shouldn't have to guess how your interest in equine medicine (for example) developed, if you don't have any horse experience.
Hope this is helpful! Good luck on your applications. Leverage your military experience to your advantage- you earned it, and your school/classmates/future clients would benefit from your background.