Can someone take a look at my essay??

Hi, I'm currently applying to a couple of osteopathic schools. I just completed the secondary application for TCOM and was wondering if someone could take a look at my essay for this part of the application before I submit it. Basically they wanted me to explain the concept of osteopathic medicine as I understand it. I've done my homework yet I'm still pretty new to this area of medicine. I really don't want to post it (for fear of others using it) so if anyone can PM me I would really appreciate it. Thanks!