ElectronOrbitals
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I appreciate your thoughts! Yeah I'm hoping I'll be able to show what you said through this story. The only reason I thought to include my first job is to bring it all together to something that's more recent. Good luck this cycle!!I don't think there is a problem with sharing this at all, and I don't think it's that cliche tbh. I think this is a great story that will show who you are and how you grew up -- if you were determined at 10, you are probably a determined person today. I see how you're trying to connect it with the vow you made at 17 with your first job, but I'm not sure if that part would be a good addition to this story.
I'm just another applicant, and this is just my opinion so do with it what you will. Good luck this cycle!
Absolutely, thank you! I want to make sure they don't get that impression from this experienceNot a cliche at all. You are applying alongside applicants (many, many applicants) whose parents handed them a couple $20 bill every week as walking around money.
That said, make sure you aren't coming across as someone who is choosing medicine for the money.
I'm hoping that you interpret it as proud, the good kind of proud, not the "look at me, I'm better than you" proud?Proud yes- stuck up absolutely not.
Oh I did. And you should be proud.I'm hoping that you interpret it as proud, the good kind of proud, not the "look at me, I'm better than you" proud?
Oh okay! Thank you for the input as always!Oh I did. And you should be proud.