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A question about the diversity essay... Any help is greatly appreciated!!

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I'm curious what makes you hate B? I don't disagree with you necessarily but I want to understand what makes it weak/not useful?
So common, and not a cool factor thing to say "I fought ignorance". You're supposed to do that!
 
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HouseJC

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I agree that B is better. But I'd also suggest re-phrasing it a bit (i.e. using actual medicine might be necessary to help them get the proper treatments for medical issues.) Are you qualified to state that Eastern/alternative medicine is not actual medicine and are not proper treatments?

Obviously, I would more context, but that is one way how your statement can raise a few eyebrows that does not reflect well on you (in my opinion).
 
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