People have told me that my PS is strong. However, they remarked that other than my compassion/empathy, it doesn't really show any of my achievements. I just focus on a few key experiences (not things I did) that led me to medicine (and my reactions and thoughts).
I used all 15 of my activity slots to talk about my leadership, research, etc. Do you think I should try to weave some of my more substantial achievements/things I did into the essay? Or leave it as is and don't interrupt the narrative?