Adversity/Challenge Essay on Mental Health - Feedback?

[redpanda71]

Hi everyone! I apologize if this isn't the place for this and would be happy to move my post if need be. I recently posted on here about writing my experiences when my sibling was put on suicide watch (with his permission to write about it) for my adversity essay. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read my essay and provide feedback (would also be willing to return the favor!).

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[Mr.Smile12]

I will advise you that the adversity/challenge essay should be about something that directly affected you, not another family member. Though it is definitely a challenge, the expectation is on something by the environment you are living in or have personally experienced that is the source of the adversity or challenge.