Any willing readers for a short secondary that I'm nervous about?

[Justapremedguy]

Hey! Please let me know if you'd be willing to read it. I can't tell if it answers the prompt or comes off as judgy or patronizing. The prompt is: Describe a situation that you have thought to be unfair or unjust, whether towards yourself or towards others. How did you address the situation, if at all? (200 words)
Let me know if I can PM it to you. Thanks!

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[squids82]

PM it to me and I can give it a read

 

[brockhamptonfanacct]

Disclaimer: I’m just a premed, but I work as a freelance writer and a writing tutor. I can read it

 

[princesspeach2]

I'd be happy to give it a read! Just an undergrad, but I've been told by my last English teacher that I should be a writing tutor