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Hi guys,
Would anyone like to critique my diversity essay? I've received vastly different responses from my siblings when I asked them to read (one said she loved it, the other said to scrap it and start over) so I'd like some more opinions. This is the essay that's holding back most of my secondary submissions, so I'd really appreciate some help. Let me know and I'll PM it to you. Thank you!!
Would anyone like to critique my diversity essay? I've received vastly different responses from my siblings when I asked them to read (one said she loved it, the other said to scrap it and start over) so I'd like some more opinions. This is the essay that's holding back most of my secondary submissions, so I'd really appreciate some help. Let me know and I'll PM it to you. Thank you!!