Anyone willing to read my personal statement

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JDUB44

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Would anyone be gracious enough to give my rough draft a read. Its a smidge to long (267 characters), so it needs to be cut down just a bit. Thanks to all who volunteer their time. Please be brutally honest and also all comments are more than welcome. Thanks guys

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JDUB44 said:
Would anyone be gracious enough to give my rough draft a read. Its a smidge to long (267 characters), so it needs to be cut down just a bit. Thanks to all who volunteer their time. Please be brutally honest and also all comments are more than welcome. Thanks guys


I'd love to.

Please email me:

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anyone else? Pretty please
 
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I'll give it a read as well, but I can't promise that I will have any earth shattering recommendations...

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I am looking for anyone to read over my PS as well.
I am trying to submit by fri...I have made a bunch of revisions after some constructive feedback, but I'm afraid that with each revision, i'm make it worse (or I might have introduced grammar errors).
I would be willing to read someone elses (I am much better at editing other's work than my own).
 
Anyone know of people who used essayedge? I am considering it. Also, I don't know how open you guys are to exchaning PS's, but PM me if you would like to exchange.
 
obrn said:
I'll give it a read as well, but I can't promise that I will have any earth shattering recommendations...

I'll take a look as well.
 
what do you guys think about being under the character requirement? mine is about 500 characters below the requirement, but at the moment i think it's very good.
 
PM the personal statement and I'll take a look at it and try to give some advice.
 
send it my way. i need a distraction tonight :)
 
PM me, i'll try to read it by tomorrow.
 
Pm me, i will read it too
 
I'll read a couple. Just PM
 
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