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Anyone willing to take a look at my personal statment and make comments on it?

Discussion in 'Pre-Dental' started by Smooth Operater, May 5, 2007.

  1. Smooth Operater

    Smooth Operater don't bug "operatEr"! 5+ Year Member

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    Hello guys,

    After a week of staying home and writing my personal statment/essay, I think I am ready to go. But I would like to get few people to read it and make comments on it. If you would like to read it, please PM me.

    Thanks for your help! :D
     
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  3. wizziefiend

    wizziefiend Guest

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    I'll read it. Every school said mine was really good...I sorta have an idea why but not really. I am not a very great writer so I believe it was content they liked so much.

    I'll take the time and send ya back some good comments though.

    PM me for my email
     
  4. i will...pm it to me
     
  5. t man

    t man Epoxi-Lips 2+ Year Member

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    care to give any free tips, fiend?
     
  6. pre-dentalguy

    pre-dentalguy Senior Member 7+ Year Member

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    PM it to me and I'll let you know my comments.

    Marion
     
  7. jeninny44

    jeninny44 2+ Year Member

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    Personally, I wouldn't take advice from anyone who gets a D in Chem 1 if you paid me :laugh:
     
  8. hahahahahahahahahahahahaha



     
  9. Rev Balls

    Rev Balls 2+ Year Member

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    come on guys, the kid might still be able to help out even though he got a D in chem 1. Chem 1 is not that easy. I have seen many smart people right here in my school getting hosed in that class.
     
  10. im not laughing at him....im jsut laughing at the situation and the comment...


     
  11. pre-dentalguy

    pre-dentalguy Senior Member 7+ Year Member

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    It's all good dude. It was just a rough semester. I think everyone goes through that sometimes.

    I have a damn MBA from Yale and an undergrad in Business w/ a minor in pre-engineering. I'm not paying any attention to any of these kids on here. I've already had 4 pre-interviews at great schools. I'm golden!! Unfortunately, the courses I have left is Chem1/2 and Ochem1/2.

    So you can laugh at my expense homeboy!! But come next cycle, I'll be in D school. Pls believe!! Where will you be?

    Marion
     
  12. jeninny44

    jeninny44 2+ Year Member

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    haha.. whatever man. If you're so smart, Yale quality, then why did you get a D in Chem 1? That stuff isn't exeactly rocket science. In fact it's downright easy. You can beak and make excuses all you want. :laugh::laugh:


    To answer your question, I will be one year ahead of you in the class of 2011 at my first choice in schools.
     
  13. jeninny44

    jeninny44 2+ Year Member

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    :laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh:

    study 30 - 40 mins a day and you'll be fine. Chem 1 is easy
     
  14. jeninny44

    jeninny44 2+ Year Member

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    well, I wouldn't. would you?
     
  15. bxs023100

    bxs023100 2+ Year Member

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    would anyone mind reading my statement as well?!!

    :)
     
  16. afrosheen

    afrosheen Junior Member 5+ Year Member

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    wut the hell is a pre-interview? sounds pretty meaningless
     
  17. TL294

    TL294 New Member 5+ Year Member

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    I will. PM me:)
     
  18. xdianaax

    xdianaax In memory of Riley Jane Moderator Emeritus 7+ Year Member

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    This is in response to jeninny44's comments, I think your def. new around here, I don't see where you get off putting other people down, if you don't have anything positive to say, then just don't say it, we come to SDN for advice and a little motivation. Everyone has rough semesters, some more than others, it's not your place to judge.
     
  19. OceanBlue

    OceanBlue HA! I knew it. 2+ Year Member

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    Common' now! Be nice. I like to think most people in here are supportive. Pre-dentalguy is a cool guy!
     
  20. OceanBlue

    OceanBlue HA! I knew it. 2+ Year Member

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    here's a comment for the OP.....people will read your personal statement and they will comment on it. However, some will read it to see what you got and use some of your ideas. Are you okay with that? If you are, then it's okay!
     
  21. SHC1984

    SHC1984 Banned Banned 5+ Year Member

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    Maybe Marion is really good at English...in that case he will be the best to ask for reading your PS. :thumbup:
     
  22. litldime

    litldime D2 Moderator Emeritus 5+ Year Member

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    all i can say is haters roam this earth..if you're not interested in what anyone else is saying move along....everyone here is just trying to help
    -ld
    i thought we were all pass high school :thumbdown:
     
  23. wizziefiend

    wizziefiend Guest

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    Chicks dig it when you're pre- on everything.

    What is a pre-engineering by the way??
     
  24. burgler09

    burgler09 2+ Year Member

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    Why would you even post something like that and expect other people to want to help you out?
     
  25. doc toothache

    doc toothache 10+ Year Member

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    Anyone who has to resort to using another applicant's ideas on why they want to pursue a career in dentistry has bigger problems than needing a critique of their personal statement.
     
  26. OceanBlue

    OceanBlue HA! I knew it. 2+ Year Member

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    a pre-engineering person is a person who can build a bridge, but then it'll collapse 5 minutes later. Sorta like a pre-dent....a pre-dent is a person who can do extraction, but your patients will probably turn around and sue you because you did your extraction on the wrong tooth.
     

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