Can anyone read my personal statement? No one in the PS thread is responding...

[StephanieZ]

I need to send in my AMCAs ASAP, I am late. Can anyone take the time to read my statement? Nobody is responding to me in the personal statement readers thread, and yes I messaged people from the most recent list. I need to cut some things out. I don't need a detailed clean-up, I'm just looking for someone to tell me what works about it and what doesn't. Thank you.

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[paul411]

PM me, I can take a quick look.

 

[StephanieZ]

I sent it, did you get it? Thank you so much.

 

[Truzzi]

I'll give a full grammar check and brief comment on the content/message. I'll leave a more full content commentary for the senior members.

 

[Lunasly]

My father is an English professor and is always willing to help. He is a little bit busy at the moment, so I don't think he can get it back to you in 1 - 2 days, but I am sure in 3 - 4 days. Just PM me if you want his e-mail or you can copy paste it in a PM whatever works for you.

 

[nisarg2010]

I can help with the content and my gf (4th year English major) can help with grammar, etc. if its ok with you. PM or email what ever works for you.

 

[10Acious]

I can read and edit if you'd like. PM to me if interested!

 

[Dimkin]

PM me if you want me to take a look. I helped my friend last month on his PS. I'm sure I can give you some feedback.

 

[10Acious]

Can I send my PS for review to any one of you guys as well? I would really really appreciate it....

 

[MrBird]

I'll take a look!

 

[Truzzi]

Can I send my PS for review to any one of you guys as well? I would really really appreciate it....

Sure.

 

[k12123]

I know it's a but late but I'll take a look if you'd like !

 

[macsta]

Sure, I can take a quick look.