Cadet133

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Can someone give me some constructive criticism on my opening statement please? I want to see if it grabs your attention or if its a good opening.

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gutonc

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It's terrible. And it doesn't matter.

And no, I don't actually need to read it to know that.
 

Millineutron

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its a bit of a relief and kinda depressing to know something I'm putting so much time and effort into is not going to matter anyway.
I just wish I could get myself to not care enough and finish the darn thing.
 
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Cadet133

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its a bit of a relief and kinda depressing to know something I'm putting so much time and effort into is not going to matter anyway.
I just wish I could get myself to not care enough and finish the darn thing.
I have the same exact feeling man.