Greetings,
This is my first post/thread on here so please help me out. I need help with my disadvantaged statement. Please let me know if there are any gramatical errors as English is not my first language.
Thanks for the help in advanced guys.
I come from a family of two immigrants, my dad being Peruvian and my mother Dominican. My parents never made more than $20,000 dollars a year, but still manged to put me through private school so I could learn English in Puerto Rico. I come from a home of poverty, alchoholism, drugs and domestic violence. I grew up seeing things no child should ever see their parents do and visiting one to many police stations throughout my life. I was constantly working at my mothers community store, with no pay, because we could not afford to hire employees. At the age of 18 I tried to attend college, but withdrew my application as I couldn't afford it, even after getting a full pell grant. I had no choice but to join the Army for four years of active duty and two combat deployments to Iraq and Afghanistan in order to finally pay for my education. I currently take care of my mother (who is diabetic with arthritis), go to school using my Post 911 GI Bill, and hold a part time job to make ends meet. If it weren't for the FAP program, I would not have been able to pay to take the MCAT, let alone apply to medical schools at $30 an application.
This is my first post/thread on here so please help me out. I need help with my disadvantaged statement. Please let me know if there are any gramatical errors as English is not my first language.
Thanks for the help in advanced guys.
I come from a family of two immigrants, my dad being Peruvian and my mother Dominican. My parents never made more than $20,000 dollars a year, but still manged to put me through private school so I could learn English in Puerto Rico. I come from a home of poverty, alchoholism, drugs and domestic violence. I grew up seeing things no child should ever see their parents do and visiting one to many police stations throughout my life. I was constantly working at my mothers community store, with no pay, because we could not afford to hire employees. At the age of 18 I tried to attend college, but withdrew my application as I couldn't afford it, even after getting a full pell grant. I had no choice but to join the Army for four years of active duty and two combat deployments to Iraq and Afghanistan in order to finally pay for my education. I currently take care of my mother (who is diabetic with arthritis), go to school using my Post 911 GI Bill, and hold a part time job to make ends meet. If it weren't for the FAP program, I would not have been able to pay to take the MCAT, let alone apply to medical schools at $30 an application.