Diversity Essay Help!

[Big Tall Doctor]

Dearest members of SDN, as I have hit quite the rock block in terms of how a school might best benefits from my own skills and attributes. I initially planned to write about my development through sports into a team player to ultimately mentor for kids of all shapes and sizes. A new idea struck me, how I used volunteering with the disadvantaged populations helped me cope with terrible loss that I experienced last year, which ultimately set me on the path for applying this cycle. I would appreciate any input on this matter and I hope you all have a great day.

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[Goro]

You're supposed to volunteer. Saying "I volunteered with others and it helped me with a big problem" is not anything you're bringing to the Class. In essence, this thoughtline is about you, not what you have to offer.

Being an athlete has been done to death.

Try again.

 

[Big Tall Doctor]

Thank you! @Goro