Help revising my secondary please

[stu403270]

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I've been prewriting my secondaries and I was hoping someone could help look over a particular school's secondary (dream school) and let me know if I answered the question entirely and in a clear way. Thanks guys!

 

[Dr. Stalker]

DM me your secondary; the prompts and your responses (along with character limits). I'd be happy to review it.