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Hello,
I'm having a bit of troubling writing the "why medicine" part of in PS where I talk a bit about these two experiences I had. When I write it ends up coming off either too cheesy, or too preachy or not getting the point across. .
1) I volunteered as an orientation leader to help first-years transition to university. I talk about how one of my students was in crisis bc they failed a midterm and I helped them through their situation. I want to convey that the happiness and joy I felt from being able to help someone was vulnerable was why I wanted to go into medicine because I can help patients who are also vulnerable
2) I worked in a clinical research lab with seniors. I talk about one senior who didn't have the financial means to afford transportation to his appointments, which made accessing healthcare difficult. It impacted me because this is where I first hand got to see the impact of inequity in our healthcare system. And I want to become a physician, so I can help people who may have barriers in attaining healthcare.
I'm having a bit of troubling writing the "why medicine" part of in PS where I talk a bit about these two experiences I had. When I write it ends up coming off either too cheesy, or too preachy or not getting the point across. .
1) I volunteered as an orientation leader to help first-years transition to university. I talk about how one of my students was in crisis bc they failed a midterm and I helped them through their situation. I want to convey that the happiness and joy I felt from being able to help someone was vulnerable was why I wanted to go into medicine because I can help patients who are also vulnerable
2) I worked in a clinical research lab with seniors. I talk about one senior who didn't have the financial means to afford transportation to his appointments, which made accessing healthcare difficult. It impacted me because this is where I first hand got to see the impact of inequity in our healthcare system. And I want to become a physician, so I can help people who may have barriers in attaining healthcare.