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Hi everyone! Hope you're all doing well. I'm having a bit of trouble figuring out what to write about for my adversity essay. Most of my adversity has stemmed out of my identity as a gay man, but I already wrote my diversity essay about that so I don't want to be repetitive.
I wrote a draft today about the difficulty I had moving across the country (from FL to CA) for university and rough start to school (was about to transfer). I highlighted the importance of perseverance and perspective in approaching any situation. Had someone read it and they said it could come off as possibly privileged.
I'm not sure what else to write about, the only other idea I have in my mind is this year my family went through a difficult time and my parents almost divorced because we found out my dad was cheating on my mom, and how I felt the need to hold the family together and be strong for everyone. They ended up working things out, but i'm not sure if this is a good idea; I don't want it to seem like i'm using all of my "cards" (gay card and now almost? divorce card lol).
Let me know if you guys have any ideas about this. Thank you to anyone who can help.
I wrote a draft today about the difficulty I had moving across the country (from FL to CA) for university and rough start to school (was about to transfer). I highlighted the importance of perseverance and perspective in approaching any situation. Had someone read it and they said it could come off as possibly privileged.
I'm not sure what else to write about, the only other idea I have in my mind is this year my family went through a difficult time and my parents almost divorced because we found out my dad was cheating on my mom, and how I felt the need to hold the family together and be strong for everyone. They ended up working things out, but i'm not sure if this is a good idea; I don't want it to seem like i'm using all of my "cards" (gay card and now almost? divorce card lol).
Let me know if you guys have any ideas about this. Thank you to anyone who can help.