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Hello all,
I submitted my primary but have noticed two issues in the activity section that I don't feel comfortable with.
1.) I said: "I also shadowed Dr. Regina, pediatrician, through whom......"
-Now correct me if I am wrong but shouldn't I have added an, "a" before pediatrician.
2.) I added a comma after "and."
-I said: Prenatal fund is an organization that fosters friendship, courage and, mentorship"
I feel ashamed and my parents asked me to just withdraw my app and apply next year, as these are errors that won't go unnoticed. This is truly unfortunate and I don't know if they're right and I should just cancel my app.
@Catalystik @gonnif @LizzyM @Goro
I submitted my primary but have noticed two issues in the activity section that I don't feel comfortable with.
1.) I said: "I also shadowed Dr. Regina, pediatrician, through whom......"
-Now correct me if I am wrong but shouldn't I have added an, "a" before pediatrician.
2.) I added a comma after "and."
-I said: Prenatal fund is an organization that fosters friendship, courage and, mentorship"
I feel ashamed and my parents asked me to just withdraw my app and apply next year, as these are errors that won't go unnoticed. This is truly unfortunate and I don't know if they're right and I should just cancel my app.
@Catalystik @gonnif @LizzyM @Goro
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