I would love to have you take a gander at my app essay! Any advice is much appreciated :)

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Attached below is the essay, let me know what I can work on! Hope everyone is having a great day 🙂

I really enjoyed reading your essay. I applaud you for getting through all the obstacles that were led out infront of you.

The one comment I have is about your experience with Dr. X. Did you have several days of shadowing? If your shadowing experience is limited, I would mention other resources that supplemented your interest in podiatry.
 
I really enjoyed reading your essay. I applaud you for getting through all the obstacles that were led out infront of you.

The one comment I have is about your experience with Dr. X. Did you have several days of shadowing? If your shadowing experience is limited, I would mention other resources that supplemented your interest in podiatry.
I’m so glad! And yes, I have had several shadowing sessions with Dr. X, upwards of 60 hours.
 
Thank you so much for the time and effort you put into this forum, I really appreciate it. Since posting, I have had the opportunity to change my essay a little bit. If you are still interested in providing feedback, my most recent revision is attached below.
 

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Thank you so much for the time and effort you put into this forum, I really appreciate it. Since posting, I have had the opportunity to change my essay a little bit. If you are still interested in providing feedback, my most recent revision is attached below.

Sent, good job!
 
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