I'm ESL. Can Anyone Help Proofread my Personal Essay?

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Hi all, English is my second language so naturally my grammar and sentence structure aren't all that great. If anyone is good with writing, please help me read these essays and give me your most critical opinion/suggestion on contents or on anything. Please help as I don't want my essays to have too many grammatical errors. They're not long. I can PM you them. Thanks so much.

 

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Feel free to send it to me.
If you want my e-mail its [email protected]