Is anyone willing to read and review my Personal Statement?

[crim_01]

Hello everyone!

I was hoping is someone could please look over my PS.

I just wana make sure it sounds decent and non-convoluted And also wana make sure the grammar is good.
FYI, English is my second language, so it's another reason why I really would like an outside view.

Thanks and just let me know if anyone is interested!

Edit: I see that @Relax! , @soccerusa .... might be available to review. Any of you have some time to spare to help me out?

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[heebeejeebies]

A little (read: very) late in the cycle to be submitting your primary.

 

[caffeinemia]

A little (read: very) late in the cycle to be submitting your primary.

Agreed. Also, have you tried looking in the sticky-ed thread for 2015-2016 volunteer readers?

 

[theonlytycrane]

I'm willing to help take a look if you still need a reader

 

[crim_01]

A little (read: very) late in the cycle to be submitting your primary.

Yeah, I do understand that.

Agreed. Also, have you tried looking in the sticky-ed thread for 2015-2016 volunteer readers?

I did, and I tagged them in the OP to see if they were interested.

I'm willing to help take a look if you still need a reader

Thanks!!!
I'm gonna PM you my PS.

 

[Lawpy]

It's unlikely the two you tagged will respond at this point. I have some time now so I can help out before the weekend hits.

 

[crim_01]

It's unlikely the two you tagged will respond at this point. I have some time now so I can help out before the weekend hits.

Oh ok, thanks for the heads-up.
And thank you for willing to do this!

 

[winterwind_23]

I can help you read it. I'm applying this cycle, so I'm not as experienced, but I do have 8 interviews so far, so my PS must not have been that horrible.

 

[crim_01]

I can help you read it. I'm applying this cycle, so I'm not as experienced, but I do have 8 interviews so far, so my PS must not have been that horrible.

Awesome. Thanks! Pm-ed.