Looking for a volunteer to read my 1st draft P.S.

[Tas]

If someone has time, I would really appreciate someone reading my 1st draft (truely first draft) personal statement. I sort of wanted to ensure it's not coming across as too negative or too wishy washy

Just post under my name and I'll PM it to you.

It's not a clean draft, It has spelling/grammar problems, but I wanted to ensure I was on the right track before I put in the hours and hours to fully polish it up.

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[Aaron Earles]

I will take a look at it Tas. Just PM it to me. I will try an get it back to you ASAP.

Aaron

 

[Tas]

Thanks Aaron, I'm PM'ing it now, take just a minute.

 

[Aaron Earles]

No problem Taz. Have a good day.

Aaron

 

[Tas]

PM'd

Thanks a ton Aaron, you have a great day too!

 

[Echinoidea]

if you want a 2nd opinion as well, I'd be happy to read it and make suggestions.

 

[Tas]

Great thanks very much, I'll PM it to you here in just a moment.

 

[kudzu]

feel free to send it this way as well, i'll try to get it back atcha tomorrow...

 

[Aaron Earles]

Tas,

I just finished reading your essay. I PMed you with the suggestions. Good job bro, it was a very touching personal statement. Keep your head and and good lluck to you!

Aaron

 

[group_theory]

You already have 3 offers but if you need an extra one (or someone to criticize your grammar), feel free to PM me

Group_theory
PCOM 2007

 

[DOctorDAnny]

Howdy,
I would love to help you with your personal statement if you still want help!! I really enjoy helping other students get into DO programs. I've been working as a pre-medical advising assistant for three years, in addition to getting into KCOM. If you want help, please don't hesitate to ask.
[email protected] (kirksville college of osteopathic medicine)
Later ,
danny