Need Some Personal Statement Critique Please!

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brabaroni

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Hey I'm looking for a few people to critique my personal statement. I've been through quite a few different stories, with this version having been through multiple cycles of revision. At this point, I'm set that this is the story I'm talking about and I'm looking for people to make sure there isn't anything I could do to make it better!

Please send me a message or comment on here and I'll send you a google docs link to edit it on. Thanks!

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