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toxin

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Would anyone be willing to give me some constructive criticism on my personal statement. I have been working on it for a while and I think I have it down but Im worried about grammar more than anything else since english is not my first language.

Any kind souls that have nothing else better to do on a sat night :)?
 

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toxin said:
Would anyone be willing to give me some constructive criticism on my personal statement. I have been working on it for a while and I think I have it down but Im worried about grammar more than anything else since english is not my first language.

Any kind souls that have nothing else better to do on a sat night :)?
PM me your statement and I'll get it back to you tomorrow.
 

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toxin said:
Would anyone be willing to give me some constructive criticism on my personal statement. I have been working on it for a while and I think I have it down but Im worried about grammar more than anything else since english is not my first language.

Any kind souls that have nothing else better to do on a sat night :)?
I know that there are threads of this type elsewhere, but I wouln't mind getting a second opinion on mine. I you would be so kind, pm me or reply to this post if you'd be willing to give it a look. ;)
 

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More than happy to do so....PM me and include your statement.
 

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Yeah, me too! I have an English degree, and work as an editor. Anyone who wants grammar reviews of PSs is welcome to PM me too! Include your email address so I can send your file as an attachment back to you.
 

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It sounds like there have already been a few good offers, but if anyone else needs some reviewing, feel free to pm me as well. I'm an English tutor for my athletic dept and reading something that hasn't been written by a future NBA player is always a big thrill for me:)
 
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