Hi, I'm planning to begin writing my personal statement. For those who have good personal statements according to critique by friends/family/etc. what was the content or your essay? How much did you talk about your research/volunteering/achievements in your ps? So far, i think my essay is gonna be something like: "I have participated in organization blah. I did research at blah blah blah and received support from blah fellowships. I also volunteer at blah hospital, blahblah hospital, and blahblahblah hospital. My research and volunteering experience have encouraged me to pursue medicine". Pretty generic-sounding, eh?