Hello everyone - I am applying for the entering class of '05 and am trying to get my personal statement together - I currently have four rambling pages that I'm trying to cut down and am having a hard time getting the gist of the shorter P.S. I know that some of you offerred to read personal statements, but at this point, I feel that I could definitely benifit from reading some completed, polished personal statements. Would any of you be willing to allow me to read yours? I'd definitely appreciate it! I know that there are books/websites that address this, but all these essays are written by students accepted at Harvard who have saved starving children in Africa, have mapped the human genome, and have 40+ on their MCATs. I think reading a more realistic personal statement could help me out - thanks so much!!