Please critique my personal statement

[Bikini Princess]

Hi,

I need people to critique my personal statement. PM me if you want to, then I'll PM you the statement.

Be as harsh as possible, and also pretend you are an adcom member reading hundreds of them.

Thanks!!

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[Grand mal]

Come on, be bold...post it!! You know you want to. Besides it really might help spark those of us who need a little jump start getting one finished.

You want feedback? Post it. You'll get feedback.

 

[seaturtle112]

yeesh, don't post it! confidentially send it to people who can give you some solid, considered feedback. that'll be best. good luck BP!

 

[bluebird]

check your PM