Hello.
I have a few questions for the smart one.
Did you egregiously misuse/overuse commas in your AP English Language & Composition Test like you did here?
Don't worry, I've provided some corrections for you.
" . . . age of 14 (10th grade) its"
The part where you bragged about your young age for a tenth grader (showing how super smart you are) should have included a semicolon, followed by "it's." ("It's" is a contraction, crazee8. "Its" shows possession.)
"(By the way, you're really not impressioning anyone, I am not even in college yet . . ."
Should be: " . . . not impressioning[sic] anyone. [new sentence]
I am not even in college . . . [ed: awesome]
[there are more errors in this badly formed paragraph, "it's" just too much work to correct them all. ]
"I don't think the fact that I deeply respect my mother and her 'simple sayings,' has bearing on my IQ . . . "
[no comma necessary after "sayings"]
"Maybe its because, I am not self-conscious about the image"
[honey cakes, there's no comma necessary after "because"]
" . . . you are all very bitter about my accomplishments perhaps because of your own shortcomings. "
[should be: "about my accomplishments, perhaps due to your own shortcomings . . . "
"Jonny Quest, wrongfully assumed that as a 17 year old, I couldn?t possibly understand the complexities of quantum mechanics."
[no comma after Quest, friend]
I won't get into all your overused commas, for they are too numerous. I just wonder about the quality of so-called education you are receiving.
Be my friend. You can tell me about how smart you are, then I can find logical inconsistencies in all your statements.
Originally posted by crazee8
I scored a 5 on the AP English Language test and am also quite competent in the humanities as well[nice structure]. In fact, the only reason,[sic] I even said what math classes I was taking is because you condescendingly asserted that [since] I am only 17, couldn?t possibly understand quantum mechanics. Once again, you [made an assumption(?)], when you really don?t me or what I am capable off. I am not at all arrogant[;] [furthermore,] most [of my peers(?)] don?t even know what classes I am taking.