Secondary essay worried about putting too much identifying information

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For one of my secondary essays, I am to describe a time I learned something from someone different than myself. I have a good essay right now, but I'm worried because I describe some characteristics about this person that I'm thinking could be too personal. The description is important for the essay, because it is what makes the person different than myself. Can anyone offer advice?
 

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For one of my secondary essays, I am to describe a time I learned something from someone different than myself. I have a good essay right now, but I'm worried because I describe some characteristics about this person that I'm thinking could be too personal. The description is important for the essay, because it is what makes the person different than myself. Can anyone offer advice?
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