Seeking feedback on my PS

[amateurpedagogue]

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Is anyone willing to give it a read? Looking for people to give advice on the overall flow and appropriateness of the conclusion. Any feedback would be much appreciated!

 

[PapaGuava]

Please feel free to check here for available PS readers as well

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[amateurpedagogue]

Yeah I did that! It's been a few days without any replies though.