Without stats and saying which schools you will send the LOI to, we can't really offer help. Who knows if the schools are even receptive to the LOI.So out of the ten schools I have left, I still feel like I may have a shot for II at maybe two of them, so I am determined to write a LOI/update to them. I have 1II and 14R so far this cycle. If I get an II and ultimately accepted by any of these two schools, I will matriculated without a doubt. So my question is whether I should mention anything about my app cycle and that if accepted I will definitely matriculated along with my desire and updates?
You're going to include this for two schools? What if you don't like what you see at the interview? What if a third school offers you a full ride? And if both accept you, what then?I will be extremely honored to receive an interview invite if given one. And if accepted, I will not even hesitate to matriculate?
this doesn't specifically mention your 14 rejections but still sounds every bit as desperate. if i was an adcom i'd probably toss you straight in the rejection bin after seeing this, to put you out of your misery. just send a standard letter of interest. there is no way that your poor cycle is going to help you here.Obviously I won't mention that I have 14 rejections, but simply something along the line that my application cycle hasn't been going well, and that I will be extremely honored to receive an interview invite if given one. And if accepted, I will not even hesitate to matriculate?