Soon to be 2nd year dental student and willing to critique PS

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yihaej12

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Hey guys, I helped last year editing/reviewing people's personal statements, and I'm back here to do it again!

This summer I'll be starting my first quarter as a 2nd year dental student, so I've gotten some more dental school experience under my belt as well as closer relationships with some faculty members.

PM me your personal statements if you want me to review them. I do have final's approaching as well as a summer externship program, but I will try to get them back to you in the most timely manner as possible.

Here are some comments people have made in regards to my feedback:

'Hey everyone!! I would strongly encourage anyone to take advantage of Yihaej12's help regarding personal statements. I sent him/her my PS and in less than a week, he/she had it reviewed and slightly edited as well. Yihaej12 also gave me lots of detailed feedback on what I could write to end my PS with a stronger conclusion. My professors have told me that it is literally night and day!!! I am now confident that the ADCOMS won't fall asleep while reading my PS. I am forever grateful. PLEASE DO YOURSELF A FAVOR AND SEND YOUR PS HIS/HER WAY!!!!!"

"I agree completely. Yihaej12 was so helpful in critiquing my personal statement - she didn't just write a short "it looks good," but really gave detailed, thoughtful feedback. She's also still accepting personal statements so I highly recommend sending them her way!! Thanks so much, @yihaej12 !"

"@yihaej12 was very helpful in critiquing my personal statement and even gave me a great addition to throw into my PS. I'd definitely recommend hitting her up if you need assistance. There aren't many people that would offer to do this, especially those who are already accepted so take advantage now for those of you who know you NEED a good PS. Thanks again @yihaej12!"

"@yihaej12 did an awesome job helping me know where I need to make improvements with my personal statement. If you need help I definitely recommend letting her give it a look because it can't do anything but help!"

"I agree with those post above. @yihaej12 was very helpful in how she felt I could improve my personal statement to best showcase my strengths. She even offered to revise my second draft by her own goodwill! It's always reassuring when there are other pre-dents, and even soon to be dental students in her case that will go out of her way to help others succeed in becoming successful applicants. The future of dentistry is bright and @yihaej12 is a shining example. She is doing this all free of charge as well which is very commendable. send your personal statements her way!"

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Dental students who volunteer before finals to help pre-dental students apply right before the cycle opens. :angelic::angelic::angelic:

On the side note, nice photography skills and you should include an actual Husky in the first few pictures! I was confused when I saw the dog. o_O
 
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I always felt skeptical about sending my ps to strangers online. But it appears you are as angelic as they say! Will be pming you mine later today! Your awesome!
 
I shot my PS to you last week, have you had any chance to look it over?
 
I shot my PS to you last week, have you had any chance to look it over?

I also pm'd last week. I'm sure she'll get to both of ours when she can. With finals and others also sending in their statements, it may take some time to get back to us. Patience :)
 
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I shot my PS to you last week, have you had any chance to look it over?

Ive gotten it! Along with 30 others....hahaha. Ill be finishing up finals in about a week and a half. Im sorry, but its quite hectic right now! Thank you for being patient. I will get to everyone's personal statements as soon as I am able to, no doubt. :)
 
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I also pm'd last week. I'm sure she'll get to both of ours when she can. With finals and others also sending in their statements, it may take some time to get back to us. Patience :)
thank you for understanding!! 7 cumulative finals in one week is no joke.
 
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Going to send you mine now! Good luck with finals!
 
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Ive gotten it! Along with 30 others....hahaha. Ill be finishing up finals in about a week and a half. Im sorry, but its quite hectic right now! Thank you for being patient. I will get to everyone's personal statements as soon as I am able to, no doubt. :)

Sweet! thank you. GL with finals!
 
Has anyone here gotten their personal statements critiqued and returned?
 
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Has anyone here gotten their personal statements critiqued and returned?
Just got back from a 3 day backpacking trip that I started right after finals. I am going to start tomorrow :)
 
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Sorry everyone, but I am not receiving personal statement review requests anymore. I've received over 40 PS's and I just want to make sure I get to everyone before accepting more reviews. Once Im accepting again, Ill post back on here :)

For everyone who's already sent me their PS's, don't worry I will get to them!!
 
Aloha,
Seeing your msg here is big releif. I have started writing my SOP i feel very frustrated especially that i have no guidance. I wored with a writing service company it was a scam they charged mr 200dollars for doing nothing just leaving me with few sentences. Hopeffully you will be able to take a look to my sop and give me a feedback> thank you in advance




Hey guys, I helped last year editing/reviewing people's personal statements, and I'm back here to do it again!

This summer I'll be starting my first quarter as a 2nd year dental student, so I've gotten some more dental school experience under my belt as well as closer relationships with some faculty members.

PM me your personal statements if you want me to review them. I do have final's approaching as well as a summer externship program, but I will try to get them back to you in the most timely manner as possible.

Here are some comments people have made in regards to my feedback:

'Hey everyone!! I would strongly encourage anyone to take advantage of Yihaej12's help regarding personal statements. I sent him/her my PS and in less than a week, he/she had it reviewed and slightly edited as well. Yihaej12 also gave me lots of detailed feedback on what I could write to end my PS with a stronger conclusion. My professors have told me that it is literally night and day!!! I am now confident that the ADCOMS won't fall asleep while reading my PS. I am forever grateful. PLEASE DO YOURSELF A FAVOR AND SEND YOUR PS HIS/HER WAY!!!!!"

"I agree completely. Yihaej12 was so helpful in critiquing my personal statement - she didn't just write a short "it looks good," but really gave detailed, thoughtful feedback. She's also still accepting personal statements so I highly recommend sending them her way!! Thanks so much, @yihaej12 !"

"@yihaej12 was very helpful in critiquing my personal statement and even gave me a great addition to throw into my PS. I'd definitely recommend hitting her up if you need assistance. There aren't many people that would offer to do this, especially those who are already accepted so take advantage now for those of you who know you NEED a good PS. Thanks again @yihaej12!"

"@yihaej12 did an awesome job helping me know where I need to make improvements with my personal statement. If you need help I definitely recommend letting her give it a look because it can't do anything but help!"

"I agree with those post above. @yihaej12 was very helpful in how she felt I could improve my personal statement to best showcase my strengths. She even offered to revise my second draft by her own goodwill! It's always reassuring when there are other pre-dents, and even soon to be dental students in her case that will go out of her way to help others succeed in becoming successful applicants. The future of dentistry is bright and @yihaej12 is a shining example. She is doing this all free of charge as well which is very commendable. send your personal statements her way!"
 
Hi @yihaej12
Any chance you're still willing to critique my PS? I'm currently working on it - I'll be applying this cycle. Please let me know! I'd really appreciate your help!!
 
Hi @yihaej12
Any chance you're still willing to critique my PS? I'm currently working on it - I'll be applying this cycle. Please let me know! I'd really appreciate your help!!
Hey, if you would like I can take a look at it, and give you some feedback.
 
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