Very Rough Draft Personal Statement Readers?

[PA_dud3]

Hi all, would anyone have the stomach to look over my personal statement rough (and I mean Rough) draft? I basically just spent a few hours writing it after some brainstorming so it is obviously in the very early stages of being finished. I would really appreciate any help or input you guys could offer. Thank you!

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[Catalystik]

Hi all, would anyone have the stomach to look over my personal statement rough (and I mean Rough) draft? I basically just spent a few hours writing it after some brainstorming so it is obviously in the very early stages of being finished. I would really appreciate any help or input you guys could offer. Thank you!

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