Hi! So the OTCAS personal statement question is fairly general (Your Personal Essay should address why you selected OT as a career and how an Occupational Therapy degree relates to your immediate and long-term professional goals. Describe how your personal, educational, and professional background will help you achieve your goals.)
Some advice:
- Address all the questions. Tie it back to the main point you're making.
- Do not write your personal statement like an expanded resume.
They already see what is listed on your application (GPA, GRE, work/ volunteer experiences). Use these experiences to show them what you learned and how they make you a good OT).
- Be concrete. Be specific.
Don't just tell about what you did, show them. I'll provide an example taken directly from my personal statement. Telling example: "I learned to be a leader from volunteering at the American Red Cross." Showing example: "I began regularly volunteering at the American Red Cross, where exceptional mentors primed me for leadership and gave me executive responsibilities over local disaster relief efforts and home fire campaigns." This demonstrates my character as being trustworthy, responsible, and proactive in my community.
- Don't dwell on your past mistakes.
I did mention in a very short paragraph acknowledging my low GPA resulting from poor academic performance and how I've worked through that.
- Keep it at a respectable length.
I kept mine at a page and a half (708 characters). There's a good chance that a long personal statement may result with redundancy and possibly boredom.
- Get it proofread from people from all sorts of background.
For me, the challenge was letting go of my fear of people reading and critiquing my writing. It took multiple revisions and several proofreaders, but I felt like I became a stronger writer because of it. I also hired a professional proofreader who has experience with personal statements to help me flush out vague ideas and reformat sentences for greater clarity.
This is all I can think of that I would have told myself for now. I hope it helps to give you a better idea of how to approach your personal statement.