Will someone please critique my update letter?

[okayplayer]

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Please send me a PM or reply here if you'd be willing to. I'd prefer not to post the letter.

Thanks so much!

 

[diosa428]

I would be willing to look at it (I sent out mine a few weeks ago) but I don't know how helpful it will be?

 

[NunoBR]

You can send it to me too.
I will read it and try to give you advice and my best opinion.
It's good to have an outsider look at these things.
PM me if you need

 

[speranza]

I've written one of these. if you still need someone to read it, I would be happy to.

 

[nicki29]

I have written a couple of these. I would be willing to give my 2 cents worth. PM me.

 

[preetster]

you can pm me as well.

good luck!

 

[dr.kicia]

if you still need another opinion you can pm me as well....
good luck

 

[MoosePilot]

I'd take a look at it.