Would anyone be willing to critique my personal statement?

[Dr.BrownBean]

Hi guys,

I am working on my personal statement and would like someone to give me some critical feedback on it. Let me know if you would be interested in helping out.

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[rdyotz]

I can look at it for you.

 

[MonkeyArrow]

PM me.

 

[LoveBeingHuman:)]

Sure

 

[MDPedigree]

yes

 

[triplejtwo]

pm me

 

[Dr.BrownBean]

Reviving this thread. I have continued to work on my PS Draft using the feedback that I have received. Now, I need a few more people to read and critique my new draft. If anyone would be willing to help me out please let me know. Thanks guys!

 

[FroYoOreo]

I would like to trade. PM me plz.