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I wrote my personal statement, and had it proofread by career development on my college campus and he said it was necessary to have a thesis and conclusion. Also stated that I need less story and more insight, which I partially agree with. I'm reworking bits of my essay now, but it just seems nearly impossible to work those in and have the information needed in the paragraph. Do you all think this is right?
He also said don't apply Early Decision if it's not set up like this, because only top students apply early and I won't get in if it's not fixed. I feel sick
He also said don't apply Early Decision if it's not set up like this, because only top students apply early and I won't get in if it's not fixed. I feel sick