Yet Again Will Anyone Please Read My Rough Draft College App Essay

[astrife]

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Well thanks to people on SDN I scrapped what I thought was my final draft of my Hopkins undergrad app essay and started anew. I just finished my rough draft of my new essay and I'm wanting a little feedback... you don't have to do hardcore editing just some general feedback would be appreciated... thanks guys!

 

[astrife]

/bump Anyone? C'mon pretty please my deadline is in 9 days

 

[drmota]

we need a pre-pre-allo forum for this bloke. sorry holmes, i would but i got 3 midterms this week.
-mota

 

[madonna]

/bump Anyone? C'mon pretty please my deadline is in 9 days

i'll read it

 

[astrife]

opps accidentally posted essay... coming in pm one sec

 

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I am pretty good editor, you can send it to me and if I have time in-between my homework and essays, I will edit yours.

 

[Flopotomist]

I am pretty good editor,

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