Could anyone read my Personal Statement 1st Draft please?

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I have been trying to make this PS interesting to read, but I am not very confident with my English.😳😳😳 Also I need to cut it down to one page. It's 1.5 pages now....Can anyone give me some help on this? Please feel free to comment on it. 🙂

 

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I'll take a look at it. Just PM me

 

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I'll take a look

 

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Just PM me

 

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I can take a look too

 

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I can also try to help...PM me

 

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I don't want start a new thread as there is no point but is anyone willing to read mine? Thanks

 

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Sulcus said:

I don't want start a new thread as there is no point but is anyone willing to read mine? Thanks

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Sure, send it over. I will try to help 🙂

 

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sure pm

 

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I will be happy to read both posters' PS essays. Please PM me.

 

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PM them to me

 

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I'm also looking for people to look over mine 🙁

 

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Sure. Just PM me! 🙂

 

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PM me if you still need someone to read it

 

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I can help. PM to me