personal statment editing

Hi everyone! I am offering my services reviewing and providing feedback on essays and other application materials (e.g., CV/resume, diversity statement, etc.). I have been reviewing and editing application materials for Master’s and PhD programs for over a year and additionally have experience...

Is it wise to submit a personal statement without the general essay format since doing so would not enable me to fill the 2500 quota? I feel the essay itself is good and breaking any paragraphs would disrupt the flow. If you have some extra time and credentials and want to help me out, please...