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[LizzyM]

I'm confused.... didn't you plan to submit your primary application in June?
This essay is pretty rough and needs considerable editing and polishing.

 

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[LizzyM]

Some phrases to keep in mind and make your essay sound more sophisticated:

driven by intellectual curiosity from an early age
humble enough to recognize gaps in knowledge and motivated to fill in those gaps
life-long learning
compassion for the sick and injured
service to others
contributing to the knowledge that drives patient care forward.